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You were just a memory
that I tried so hard to forget.
The years passed without remembrance,
but like all ghosts, you found a way back.
Your touches were webs of a spider
that spun my mind into weaves
of madness.
I could not escape,
and my desire to do so dwindled
with every smile you infected into me.
Where was your passion waiting,
in the feast of me, or in my heart?
Is it so wrong how I longed for
my heart’s consumption?
Indeed.
After all, a ghost is far from tangible.
My heart is full,
but your stomach has become too hollow
to bear the acids of love.
©2008-2009 ~KatieKurama
:iconkatiekurama:

Author's Comments

D: I should've called this "Awful Poem".
Not really.
Maybe.
I don't know.

I worry too much about what others think, *especially* with poetry. I have so much admiration for my friends because they are so talented with words, and that admiration leads to fear when it comes to my own work. So, with this one, at least, I am trying to just see how it goes without holding back on submitting something. Dx Gomen, I did my best...

I like to be cryptic. And cynical.

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:iconmolliemayhem:
I absolutely ADORE this, ma'am.
I really, truly do.

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What a terrible situation. :/
:iconkatiekurama:
D:> Honto ni..!?
Thank yeeeeeeew!! :smooch:

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"Do you four boys take these two girls to be your seven wives?"

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